Comment on February 14th, 2007.
that was amazing…did u write it
Comment on February 14th, 2007.
Of course I did.. I don’t take credit for other peoples poems
haha. I have others, I just have been hesitant to post them.
Thanks for the compliment. ![]()
Comment on February 18th, 2007.
oh wow.
“I look at the source of the melody
And see her looking back at me.”
that kicks me most.
PS this is a *sweet* site, Jonathan. =)
Comment on February 18th, 2007.
hey..friend you got a nice poem here! i love it and i feel emotions engage with this poem of yours!
“The two become one in a single strum
From the Holy Instrument on High
And the melody flows around the world
Singing of their love that will never die.”
i love to read this part…hope you can post more poems that touches evryone’s heart…
Comment on February 18th, 2007.
hello jon, it is realy so great peom i feel it so much it touch heart and especilay this sentences so great
The volume rises as I grow closer
My heart beats times three
I look at the source of the melody
And see her looking back at me.
Comment on February 18th, 2007.
Thanks Noha.. I’m happy it touched your heart… it came from the heart. ![]()
Comment on February 19th, 2007.
Jonathan ! so cool !! i really like this poem (^_^)
Comment on February 19th, 2007.
Hey Bee
.. I’m glad you enjoyed it
.. Why don’t you hurry up and stop being so busy so we can chat more? ![]()
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